Imagine how much their performance would increase if they received recognition weekly. <<< Or 'may' or 'might' ... this statement is not fact based and now the entire writing is suspect. 500 mg of vitamin C a day s healthy ...imagine how much healthier you would be with 5000mg a day (or would that amount cause harm. Would more frequent recognition be beneficial or would the employees say 'so much talk with no rewards' or similar. If you are writing an article for a Quality magazine, make it fact based.
Imagine how much their performance would increase if they received recognition weekly. <<< Or 'may' or 'might' ... this statement is not fact based and now the entire writing is suspect. 500 mg of vitamin C a day s healthy ...imagine how much healthier you would be with 5000mg a day (or would that amount cause harm. Would more frequent recognition be beneficial or would the employees say 'so much talk with no rewards' or similar. If you are writing an article for a Quality magazine, make it fact based.